“I’ve sold helicopters to New Brockton, Skipperville, and Sweet Gum Head, and by gum it put them on the map!”
I didn’t mind it, in context it appears the author may not be a native English speaker, and that can lead to more formal and structured prose than you would use for the content
From the article: “You literally already installed Alpine the normal way as a sub-procedure of this. Just do that. Please.”